高考英语基础写作
复习系列
一是以表格形式,将统计的
数据或被说明的事物直
接用表格形式体现出来,
即统计表（table） 。
Item 1994 1995 1996 1997 1998
Food 65% 60% 48% 42% 35%
clothing 8% 9% 12%l 15% 17%
Recreation 3% 5% 7% 8% 10%
Others 24% 26% 33% 35% 38%
Total 100% 100% 100% 100% 100%
矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格
图表类说明文的类型
表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图
二是以图形形式
A 表示数据变化的曲线图（ graph ）;
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B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异
的柱状图（ bar chart / graph ）;
C 表示总体结构变化的扇形图（ pie
chart ）
graph/chart/table above …
2. the above graph/chart, it can be seen
that...
3. (正如) is shown in the graph, ...
4. has been shown from the table that…
第一步：
shows
From
As
It
图表类说明文的写作步骤
开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题, 即conclusion.
常使用的词汇有:
（图表/数据）：table, chart, graph，figure（数据）… ；
动词： describe， tell, show, represent …
常用句型：
第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，然后描写（在
描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式或对比
式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由）。注意层次。 即
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增长/减少的表达:
表示上升的动词: rise，increase，climb，go up , …；
表示上升的名词: rise，increase, …;
表示下降的动词: fall，decline，decrease，drop，
go down, …;
表示下降的名词: fall，decline，decrease，drop, …；
表示平稳: remain steady/unchanged…
常用句型：（ Facts）
was a great /slight increase /rise in…
has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in…
rate dropped slightly from 38%in…to 31% in…
4. Byparison with…,it decreased/increased/fell
from…to…
5. Statistics show a 20% rise/reduction in traffic
accidentspared with last year.
6. The population owning mobile phones increased
by 10% in 1999.
倍数的表达:
five times as many as
doubled
four more
number /rate has nearly _______
（是．．．的两倍）, as against that of last year.
number is that
of….（是…的5倍)
=The number is times than in…
(比．．．多４倍)
Reasons:
1. The reason …is that…
2. One may think of the change as a
of…
3. The change in … largely results _____
the fact that…
４.This brings the important fact
that…
５. ….is the key (因素)in…
６. It is because of … ______ …
result
why/for
from
out
factor
that
常用表达：
1. in a ,/ in short,（简而言之） / _______
speaking（总的来说）
2. summary, it is important…
3. From what has been discussed above, we can
(得出结论）that…
4. ___________（很明显地）, if we want to…, it is
necessary…
1. ___________________(毫无疑问) attention must be paid to…
2. I ______(建议)the government take effective measures to
…
3. ________, I think(就我来看) the “golden week” should
remain, for…
Obviously/Apparently
draw the conclusion
In
word generally
There is no doubt that
第三步：
suggest
Personally
归纳总结或发表评论。
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[写作内容]
根据以上数据,写一篇短
文,包括以下内容:
1.调查时间,调查问题,以
及调查对象;
2.男女生在以明星为偶像
方面的差异;
3.”父母”在男女生偶像
中的排序差异;
4.男女生在以伟人为偶像
方面的异同;
5.你的偶像及理由。
范文剖析
1.________ Last week，we did a survey among 2
，600 students on “Who is your idol”. 2._____ The
survey shows that half of the girls choose film and
TV stars as idols，while 48% of the boys for sports
stars. 3._____ As the data shows， “parents”
rank the second for the girls， but the fourth for the
boys. 4._____ However， the percentage of the
boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of
the girls. 5.________ As for myself， Thomas
Edison is my idol， because his inventions he
greatly changed our life.
范文剖析
Conclusion
Fact
Your opinion
Fact
Fact
b.数据的表达?
a. Conclusion/fact/reason/your opinion?
：
下图是我国近10年私人汽
车拥有情况,反映了人
们生活水平的变化.
[写作内容]
请根据以上数据,写一
篇短文，包括以下内容
:
1. 近10年我国私人汽
车拥有量增加了5倍多;
2. 增加的理由是：经
济增长快；节约时间。
3. 你对此现象的看法。
[写作要求]
1. 只能使用5个句子表达
全部内容;
2. 标题 :Car
Ownership in China。
实践演练
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第三人称
现在完成时&
一般现在时
and reasons
own opinion/
suggestions
1. 近10年我国私人汽车
拥有量发生了巨变；
2. 2009年私人汽车拥
有量比1999年增加了5
倍多;
3. 理由1：经济增长快;
4. 理由2：节约时间;
5. 你对此现象的看法。
时态:
人称:
要点:
篇章结构:
写作指导
99 00 01 02 03 04 05 06 07 08 09
Try to finish your passage
within 10 minutes.
[checklist]
1.是否只用了5句?
2.要点是否齐全?
3.是否符合图表类说明文的篇章结构?
4.有无语法或拼写错误?
5.是否用上了高级词汇或高级结构?
6.有无过渡性词语,使文章更连贯?
Possible Version:
As can be seen from the graph, great changes in
car ownership he taken place in China in the past
ten years. The number of private cars increased
more than 5 times from nearly 3 million in 1999 to
over 15 million in 2009. It’s mainly because the
economy of China has developed so rapidly that
many Chinese people want to own private cars.
Besides, in modern society, many Chinese need a
car to do business so as to se time. In my view,
as the car ownership constantly increases year
by year, a large number of social problems, such
as traffic jams, will turn up in nearly every city
throughout China.
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