MBA高分作文必读 20. The decline mainly comes from the fact… stems from 写作补充材料1 【简单词汇升级(闪光词汇得分点】： 21. The success is because of several factors largely attributable to 22. A number of factors could lead to the failure… account for 1. It is very important that… extremely 23. No amount of sacrifice can make up for…. compensate for 2. Teacher and students are~~ as well as 24. The smallest improvement can bring about… slightest 3. One important point is being left out… vital / essential 25. It is almost impossible that… inconceivable 4. The advantages derived from A is more important than the disadvantages of 26. One of the burning questions our society face confront B…carry more weight than 27. Now more and more people are coming to realize…people in growing 5. The most important reason is fundamental numbers 6. A may be better than B be superior to 28. Generally speaking, studying too hard may be harmful to students…. It goes 7. There is no doubt that it has its drawbacks as well as good points merits without saying that 8. It may produce a great rise in considerable / drastic 29. The question of …has now arisen as noteworthy… issue 9. There is every possibility that chance 30. There is no effective approach to the problem of… but…might be useful 10. Like anything else, it has also its problem disadvantages beneficial 11. When the advantages and disadvantages are weighed, the most striking 31. The future is not quite encouraging prospect findings are clear. obvious / apparent 32. However right the arguments may be, sound 12. Although the belief is that…a current study reveals that the popular view is 33. He makes an excuse to avoid trouble… fabricates that…. commonly-accepted 34. He had great success in achievements 13. A resent study indicates that~ survey / investigation 35. Let us pray for the sick, the old and the poor…needy 14. A new survey show that… indicate / demonstrate 36. She couldn’t stop laughing at. resist 15. Most of us have been taken in by the notion that The majority of people 37. I am surprised at his statement that…. be amazed at 16. Now in many countries, most of people…a significant proportions of the 38. The best treatment for grief is hard work… remedy pubic 39. He took a vow to give up alcohol abstain from 17. Some people may say that… argue 40. He was sure to fail the exam if he doesn’t do any revision was bound to 18. At first glance, it may seem a good idea… praiseworthy 41. We feel sorry for his sufferings agony 19. To assume that ….is nonsense. Far from being prove 42. Great progress have been made in the field of leaps 第 1 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 43. He couldn’t explain his absence from school account for illustrate 44. Get rid of all errors from the typescript eliminate 写作补充材料2：写作常用词汇总结 45. All our efforts were unsuccessfully… in vain 46. Find out the thing you want to keep. Sort out 一、图表写作常用词汇： 47. He has asked the physician about his health consult 表格图table ；图表chart；diagram graph column 48. The boy enjoys basketball…. is crazy about 描述：show; describe; illustrate; reveal; represent 49. You’d better watch that fellow…. keep an eye on 数字figure; 数据 statistic; 百分比 percentage; 比例 proportion 50. Parents often develop their children’s taste for music. cultivate 一般have 10%; at 20%; over 40% 在面积上in area 51. I feel unable to talk with anyone about anything converse 最高peaks; reached a peak/high point 52. Your help is necessary for the success of the project indispensable 最低 bottomed out; reached the bottom 53. I hope to stop commuting every day long to 变化 increase; jump; rise; climb; decrease; fall; drop; decline; reduce; fluctuate; 54. It changed his whole way of life mode remain; steady; stable; stay; same 55. They live in a large room spacious 程度 sudden/suddenly; rapid/rapidly; dramatic/dramatically; significant / 56. We walk backwards and forwards on the lawn stroll significantly; sharp/sharply; steep/steeply; gradual/gradually; slow/slowly; 57. They came in groups in twos and threes slight/slightly; stable/stably; almost; nearly; approximately; exactly; precisely；58. 危害harm‐‐‐‐endanger/damage/threaten increase by /decrease by (写出变化幅度) 59. 获得get ‐‐‐‐‐obtain/acquire/derive from 合计200美元 add up to $200 总数达：add up to 60. 解决solve‐‐‐‐settle/resolve/tackle 占世界总人数的20% make up 20% of 61. 问题/危机/灾难problem‐‐‐difficulty/crisis/disaster 从……增加到 rose/grew/climbed from…to 62. 著名的famous ‐‐‐‐distinguished/prestigious 增加到 grew up to 增至最高峰：Rise to a high of 63. 充足的enough‐‐‐‐sufficient/adequate/abundant 减少到 decrease to 跌至最低谷：drop to a low of 64. 出色的good/great‐‐‐‐-remarkable/marvelous/impressive 相当于……的3倍 three times as ….as 65. 严重的bad ‐‐‐‐-serious/severe/grave 大幅度增长 increase sharply 飞速：rapidly；sharply；steeply 66. 快乐的happy‐‐‐‐‐delighted/in good mood/in high spirits 高居榜首 Top the list/head the chart 67. 很多的many‐‐‐‐innumerable/countless/a large number of 饼状图/圆形图（pie chart） 稳固下降steady decline 68. 表明，揭示：Show ‐‐‐‐indicate reveal reflect, demonstrate, imply, suggest, 第 2 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 由…组成：consist of/be made up of /be composed of 得到结论：draw a conclusion 占44%比例：account for /make up 44 percent 二、社会热点词汇（成功，诚信，团结，和平，环境，住房，交通，就业，教位居第一：rank the first 仅次于is second to 育，网络） 居第二位：in second spot 倒数第一is the last one 人口爆炸 population explosion 第二大部份rank the second/the second largest section 计划生育 birth control 与..相比：compared with A与B成比例A be in proportion to B 加强执法 strengthen law enforcement officers 差不多：About/around/roughly 多达 as many as 失学儿童 dropout student 正好：Exactly/precisely 水平：level off 扫盲 eliminate illiteracy 柱状图（bar chart） 脱贫致富 shake off poverty and set out on a road to prosperity 递增：on the rise/increase 急剧上升: grow sharply; 人才外流 brain drain 递减：on the decline/decrease 腐败和受贿 corruption and bribery 曲线图（graph/chart/diagram） 浮夸风 tendency toward boasting and exaggeration 增加：increase / grow / rise / climb /go up 青少年犯罪 juvenile delinquency 减少：decrease / decline / fall/ reduce / go down 可持续发展 sustainable development 剧烈/显著/大幅度：sharply / dramatically / significantly / rapidly / considerably / 安居工程 housing project for low‐income urban residents enormously / profoundly / substantially 素质教育 education for all‐round development 平稳逐渐：steadily / gradually / slightly 知识产权 intellectual property fights 持续上升/下降：on an increase / o the decline 拜金主义 money worship 保持不变：remain stable / remain steady / remain unchanged 保护生态环境 preserve the ecological environment 上升后变得平稳：reach a plateau 产品科技含量 technological element of product 达到顶点/低谷：reach the top / peak / fall to the bottom 大学生创业 university students’ innovative undertaking 波动：fluctuate / rise and fall 打假 crake down on counterfeit goods/fake products 达到了：reach / approach / add up to / amount to / increase to / decrease to 盗版VCD pirated VCD 某年发生的变化：1998 saw / witnessed a sharp increase in … 恶性循环 vicious circle 是1998年的2倍：was twice as many as that in 1998 复合型人才 inter‐disciplinary talent 从图表上看：From these graphs 共同富裕 common prosperity 第 3 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 基因工程 genetic engineering 贸易顺差 surplus in trade 基本国情 fundamental realities of the country 一揽子交易 package deal 教书育人 impart knowledge and educate people 点击 point and click 精神文明建设 promote cultural and ideological progress 网上经营 web business 经济全球化 economic globalization; economic integration 网上文化 online culture 科教兴国 rely on science and education to rejuvenate the nation 吸取世界文明成果 assimilate the achievements of civilizations over the world 两个文明一起抓 place equal emphasis on material and ethical progress 依法治国 manage state affairs according to law 民工 migrant laborer 忧患意识 awareness of unexpected development 申办奥运会 bid for the Olympic Games 与时俱进 advance with times 双赢局面 win‐win situation 因材施教 teach students according to their aptitude 实事求是 seek truth from facts; be true to facts 义务教育 compulsory education 实现中华民族伟大复兴 bring about a great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation 知识经济 knowledge‐based economy 首创精神 pioneering spirit 振兴中华 make China powerful and strong; 团队精神 teem spirit 富裕 affluence 信息高速公路 information super highway 平衡预算 balanced budget 经济不景气 economic recession 繁荣 boom 经济萧条 economic depression 购买力 buying power 价格体系 price system 竞争 competition 商品价格 commodity prices 生活费用 cost of living 价格指数 price index 通货紧缩 deflation 企业管理 business management 充分就业 full employment 商业伙伴 business partners 全球经济 global economy 经济复苏 economic revival 劳动密集型的 labor‐intensive 伤害索赔 injury claims 生产力 productivity 扩大消费市场 tap the consumer market 质量管理 quality control 全球化过程 globalization process 人工智能 artificial intelligence (AI) 第 4 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 病毒 Virus 较好地驾驭生活 be a better pilot of one’s life 贩卖违禁品 bootlegging 剥夺机会 deprive oneself of the chance/right 虐待儿童 child abuse 控制我们的环境 take/gain increasing control over our owe environment 酒后驾驶 drunk driving 对……很好的了解 have a better understanding/appreciation of 贪污 embezzlement have a new perspective on; provide an insight into 伪造 forgery 把某种因素考虑进去 take sth. into account/consideration; give much thought to 三、作文常用词汇和短语 品味人生/自由/青春savor the life/freedom/youth 解决问题 crack the nuts 培养对……的信心develop/foster one’s confidence in 大家公认 it is universally acknowledged that 追求学习或职业 pursue one’s professional career/ academic 全力以赴 bring one’s talent into full play 交流经验 share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge 丰富生活 enrich our life 发挥，起到积极作用play an important/active/great role/part 扩大视野 broaden my horizon 面临困难危险be confronted with danger/difficulty; in the face of 突围困难 make breakthrough out of difficulty 阻碍了成功stand in the way of success; be an obstacle/barrier to 越来越 be increasingly +adj.; be on the rise; the growing number of 持相反/合理的观点 take the opposite/fresh view 人们认为 it is generally /widely believed/held/agreed that 揭穿某种一贯的说法shatter the myth of 许多问题 a host of/a multitude of problems 缩小差别 narrow/fill the gap/gulf (between city and country) 引起人们的注意 attract general/public/world attention to sth. 把成功/错误归因于 attribute/owe one’s success/failure to 意识到 there is a growing awareness that; awaken sb. to the fact 对……重要 be vital/important/indispensable to 适应新的形势变化 adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment / 施加压力 exert/put pressure on change 重视 attach/assign much importance/significance to 接触各种思想 be exposed to new ideas/experience 把注意力集中在 focus/concentrate one’s attention/efforts upon 获得成功 achieve/accomplish success 抓住机会 grab/seize/take the opportunity 提出观点 advance/put forward/come up with arguments/ideas 有可能 there is (little/much) possibility/likelihood that 产生影响 have/exert a profound influence on life/personality; 献身于devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career have a dramatic/undesirable effect on 大不一样/没啥两样make much difference; make little difference 第 5 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 真正重要的是 what really matters/counts is 采取强烈措施 adopt several strong measures 影响思想，态度 shape one’s thinking/attitude 一系列的环境保护条例必须制定a series of environment protection rules and 实现自己的理想，愿望 realize/fulfill/achieve one’s dream/hope; regulations need to be laid down 减轻压力，紧张 reduce/alleviate the stress/pressure 尽快 as soon as possible 提高社会地位 upgrade social status; enhance social position 中华人民共和国 the People’s Republic of China 加快，促进发展 accelerate/advance/enhance the development 出版增刊 publish a supplement 随着生活节奏的加快with the quickening pace of modern life 沮丧的gloomy; 客观的 objective; 主观的 subjective 开阔眼界broaden one’s outlook; expand one’s mental horizons 乐观的 optimistic ;悲观的 pessimistic; 充满激情have a burning desire for 怨恨的 resentful ;可敬的 respectable 充满渴望have a great passion for 惊恐的 scared 充分发挥潜力develop one’s ability to the full 同情的 sympathetic 充分发挥能力give full play to one’s ability 深远的影响 far‐reaching consequences 迷恋名利be obsessed with fame 以其最强有力的形式 in its strongest form 同时at the same time : 随着物价和房租迅速上升 with the prices and house rents increasing rapidly 交通问题：transportation problems 大学毕业生 university graduates 交通繁忙时段：rush hour 挣钱养活自己 earn one’s living 论题，主题：themes 赡养父母 support one’s parents 运动馆 stadium 巨大的胜利 huge victory 化工厂 chemical plant 拔河 tug of war 污染 contaminate 充满信心 full of confidence in 排出一大堆废水 drain a large amount of waste water 步调一致 keep in step with 发出强烈的味道 give off a strong smell 因……而遭受痛苦 be plagued with 当地居民 local residents 各阶层人民 all walks of life 污水 polluted water 团结一致 be united as one 当地政府 local authorities 随着路况的发展 with the improvement in road conditions 公共危害 public hazard 普遍现象 common phenomenon 第 6 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 现代社会 modern society 人民生活改善 the improvement in people’s living conditions 相互对立 in opposition to each other 改革开放政策 the reform and opening‐up policy 不管 no matter how 国民经济正在迅速发展 there has been a rapid expansion of national economy 互相冲突 in conflict with each other 出生率已经得到控制 the birth rate has been put on the control 造成巨大损失和灾难 bring about a lot of losses and disasters 生态环境破坏 destruction of ecological balance 死于肺癌 die of lung cancer 大量砍伐树木cut down large numbers of trees 产生灾难性的影响 exert a disastrous effect on 对……的生存造成显著的威胁 cause the most significant threat to the survival 全球气候 global climate of … 山洪爆发 mountain torrents break out 日益增长的需求 ever‐increasing demand 淹没农田 flood farmland 向政府呼吁 appeal to the government 席卷 sweep 建立一笔基金 set up a foundation 混浊不清 unclear and impure 保护森林资源 protect forest resources 深受其害 suffer a great deal from 依法严惩 punish severely by the law 人口飞速增长 there has been a rapid increase in the population 鼓励市民 encourage city‐residents 采取不同的态度 take different attitudes 一个更美好更光明的未来 a much better and brighter future 如何对待财富与幸福 how to approach wealth and happiness? 从失败中吸取教训 draw useful lessons from 机械与电子产品 machinery and electronic goods 丧失信心并退却了 lose heart and give in 占47% account for % 人民对待……的看法截然不同 people are quite different from each other in 吸毒 drug‐taking their opinions on… 人均收入迅速提高 average personal income increase rapidly 无可否认 there is no denying the fact that 人口的出生率已经大大下降 there has been a great decline in birth rates 极其严重的问题 extremely serious problem 儿童教育 child education 空气污染 air pollution 热门话题 hot topic 采取有力措施 take strong measure to deal with 教育专家 educational expert 众所周知 as is known to all 电视暴力对青少年行为有很大的影响力 violence on TV has a great influence 假冒伪劣商品fake and inferior commodities on young adults’ behavior 现代技术 modern technology 第 7 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 计算机的发明 invention of computers 对外开放 open the door to the outside world 极其复杂的工作 extremely complicated work 取得显著成绩 make remarkable results 法制教育 law education 合资企业 joint ventures 为了维护社会治安 in order to keep law and order 从外部投资受益非浅 benefits a lot from the outside investment 应该接受法律教育 should be supposed to get a law education 外商投资企业 foreign‐invested venture 外资 foreign capital 越来越多的人increasing number of people 享有许多优惠政策 enjoy preferential policies 保护树木的重要性 the importance of the protection of trees 高科技产业 high‐tech enterprise 购物中心 shopping centers 下岗工人 laid‐off workers 满足人民日益增长的需求 meet the growing needs of people 随着改革开放的贯彻执行 with the reform and opening up policy being 或许可以毫不夸张的说 it would be no exaggeration to say that implemented 缺乏淡水 lack of fresh water 现代化家用电器 up‐to‐date household appliances 权衡利弊 weigh up the pros and cons 带来许多问题 brings about a lot of problems 事物总是一分为二 everything has two sides 方便和舒适 convenient and comfortable 从正反两方面来辩论 debate the matter pro and con ……和……的关系 the relationship between 工业公司 industrial company 小沙丘 sand hills 做出了重要贡献 have made great contribution to 标题上写着 the caption reads 工业的发展 the development of industry 水土保持 water and soil conservation 造成了许多公害 pose a host of public hazards 沙漠化 desertification 导致了严重的后果 lead to grave consequences 赶走 drive sb. away 交通事故 traffic accidents 与战斗 fight against 死亡率/出生率 death rates; birth rates 任由态势发展 let this situation go as it is 医疗保健的改革 the improvement in medical care 遭受破坏 suffer a great destruction 假冒伪劣商品 fake and inferior products 烟草生产和消费 cigarette production and consumption 危害人民健康 endanger people’s health 大大超过 substantially exceeds 期待你的佳音 I’m looking forward to your favorable reply 经济发展 economic development 赏识他的非凡的能力 appreciate his exceptional ability 公共交通 public transport 第 8 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 流行，普遍存在 prevalence 官方发言人 authorized spokesman 暴利的，利润丰厚的 lucrative 盲目追逐时尚 follow some fashion blindly 没收 confiscate 形成不良的生活习气 be tempted into an unhealthy lifestyle 前景光明的 promising 广告宣传单 leaflets and handouts 消耗精力的 energy‐consuming 势不两立 poles apart 成熟 maturity 上网冲浪 surf on the internet 体形，身材 figure 虚假信息 fake and exaggerated 流行的，时尚的 faddy 动摇信心 shatter confidence 提供营养 nourish 抓住机遇 seize the opportunity 卡路里 calorie 通风的 ventilated 饥饿 starvation 大城市 metropolis 营养不良 malnutrition 空调 air‐conditioning; air‐conditioner;(空调机) 威胁 intimidate 氟利昂 freon 多余的 redundant 制冷剂refrigerant 难以抗拒的 irresistibly 肿瘤 tumor 贸易洽谈 business negotiation 远远超过 far surpass 房地产 real estates 左右为难 dilemma 人才招聘会 job‐hunting 温室效应 greenhouse effect 信息安全 information security 不断发展 ever‐accelerated 大势所趋 the wave of the future 不可思议 miraculous 一时冲动 an impulse activity 天气预报 weather forecast 全新的产品 brand‐new 点击鼠标 click the mouse 刺激 spur 鉴定 identify 消费者 customer 劳动强度 labor intensity 客户 client 产生电磁辐射 generate electromagnetic radiation 上司 superior 基因图谱 the mapping of human genes 第 9 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 保护知识产权 protect intellectual property 太阳能 solar energy 成人教育和职业教育 adult education and vocational education 信息网络 information network 惩治腐败 combat corruption 承担 take over 第三产业 tertiary industry 功能 function 多级化趋势 the trends towards multi‐polarity 体力劳动 physical labor 改革开放政策 the policies of reform and open‐up 代价太高 high cost 高新技术开发区 new and high‐tech industrial development zone 宇宙飞行 space flight 合法权益 lawful rights and interests 新的发现 discoveries 宏观经济模式 macro‐economic mode 与日俱增 increase every day 后起之秀 promising young people 妨碍 hinder 基础设施，基础工业和支柱产业 infrastructure, basic industries and pillar 统计数学 statistics industries 乡镇企业 township enterprise 集装箱运输container traffic 生活质量 the quality of life 假冒伪劣 fake and poor quality commodities 偏远地区 remote areas 健身房 gymnasium, fitness center 文化素质 cultural qualities 精品店 boutique 推动 give a push to 经济技术开发区 economic and technological development zone 促进进步 promote progress 经济特区 special economic zone 唐代 Tang Dynasty 就业培训 vocational training 概念 concept 科学工业园区 science‐based industrial park 改进教和学 improve teaching and learning 科教兴国 revitalizing the nation through science and education 按分数 according to the grades 可持续发展 sustainable development 传真机 fax machines 高等院校 institution of higher education 个体经营者 self‐employed businessmen 私人开办的公司 privately owned companies 工作安排 work arrangement 公共卫生 public health 电子邮件 electric mail 机关集体 government and social institution 工作场所 working place 第 10 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 总产值 general output of 活跃市场 enliven the market 跟上时代的步伐 keep pace with the times 逐步建立 gradually establish 获取知识的重要渠道 an important channel to acquire knowledge 造成损失cause a loss to 每隔一段时间 at short intervals 被列为 be listed as 落后 backward 全国人民代表大会 the National People’s Congress 外语能力 foreign language ability 制定法律 make a law 恢复 restore 十分重视 attach importance to 统一考试 unified test 基本国策 fundamental national policies 培养 train, cultivate 大力发展 strive to develop 地区性的 regional 社区服务 community service 读写困难 difficulties for employment 社会福利事业 social welfare system 就业机会 opportunities for employment 高层建筑 high‐rising building 受过良好教育 well‐educated 住房建设 housing construction 未受教育 uneducated 不吸烟者 nonsmokers 遗憾的是 it is a pity that 从长远的观点看 in the long run 造成了困难 cause some difficulties 古代中国 ancient China 急需 need badly 长时间的闭关政策 be closed and self‐fettered for a long time 中国政府 the government of China 境况 circumstance 投资环境 environment for investment 必然结论 inevitable conclusion 集中力量 concentrate on 争取外援 win foreign aid 鼓励 encourage 闭关自守 Closed‐door policy 技术改造 technological transformation 资本 capital 进口货物 imported goods 项目 items/projects 进口或出口import ,export 冒险的成分 element of risk 创收外汇earn foreign exchange 承担风险 bear the risk of 竞争厂商 competition manufacturers 世界银行 The World Bank 第 11 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 计算方法 method of calculation 牟取任何暴利 seek excessive profits 估算 estimate 灵活的 flexible 局限性 limitation 领导和组织 guide and organize 经济结构 economic structure 充分发挥……的积极性 bring one’s initiative into full play 指示说明 instruction, direction 普遍规律 general law 追求眼前利益 pursue one’s short‐term interest 广大农村 vast rural areas 原料 raw materials 推广 spread 重工业 heavy industry 把……应用于生产 apply…to production 装配和修理 assemble and repair 第三世界 the third world 大型，中型，小型 large‐size, medium‐size, small‐size 维护民族独立 defend national independence 合理的发展 rationally developed 国家主权 state sovereignty 长处，短处 strong point, week point 政治独立 political independence 各级政府government of all levels 巩固 back up, consolidate 各行各业的人们 people from all trades and professions 苦难经历 hard experience, sufferings 祖先 ancestors 实践 practice 长江流域 Yangtze river basins 改造 transformation 鸦片战争 The Opium War 中国的国情 China’s own conditions 连续十年 for ten years running 人力资源 manpower, human resources 衡量 measure, evaluate 资金不足 short of funds 财政资助 financial support 围绕 focus on 山区 mountain areas 经济效率 economic efficiency 发电 produce electricity 降低生产成本 lower production cost 取代 replace 生产力 productive forces 主张 hold, state 劳动生产率 labor productivity 共同管理 jointly manage 巨大发展 have made a big advance 一律平等 be all equal 对待 treat 第 12 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 改善 improve 企业的兼并和联合 the merger and association of enterprise 认真执行 faithfully implement 投资环境 investment environment 中外合资企业 joint ventures 温饱问题 the people’s basic need for food and clothing 独立自主 independence 希望工程 Hope Project 自力更生 self‐reliance 青年志愿者 Young Volunteers 对……有利 beneficial to 消费者协会 consumer association 加强 strengthen 小康生活 living a relatively comfortable life 实行 implement, carry out 职业道德 occupational ethics; professional ethics 自信心 confidence 综合国力 comprehensive national strength; the overall strength of the country 和平共处 coexist peacefully 和别人合作 cooperate with others 经济差距 economic gap 搭档 partner 发达国家 developed countries 实际经验 practical experience 发展中国家 developing countries 有用的知识 useful knowledge 不利于 not contribute to 创新 innovation 战略目标strategic goal 分析的技巧 analytical skill 加强与……的合作 strengthen exchange and cooperation in 犯错误 make mistake 有潜能 have potential 影响人们的行为举止 influence the way that people behave 能量 power , energy 视觉娱乐节目 visual entertainment 土地沙漠化 desertification 易受影响的 susceptible 生态恶化 deterioration of the ecology 科技的发展 advance in science and technology 酸雨 acid rain 大众健康 general health 提高人们环境意识 raise people’s awareness of the environment 得传染病 contract infections 保护生态环境 environmental protection 心脏病 heart disease 罕见的rare 不容忽视 cannot be ignored 吃饭穿衣 food and clothing 生活环境变得卫生 living environment become sanitary 贸易往来 trade contracts, commercial intercourse 疲惫不堪 wear out 第 13 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 用尽珍贵的资源 use up valuable energy resources The controversial issue has aroused opposite opinions. One focuses on …….. ;the 保存资源 conserve resources other opinion revolves around…… 负面影响 negative effect 4）利弊列举段 达到目标 attain our goals Every coin has two sides, and this issue is no exception. Above all, …In 良好的沟通技巧 good communication skill addition…More importantly… However, the negative influence it renders should not be neglected. ..not only …but also Is this phenomenon a blessing or a curse.? The following list of advantages and 写作补充材料3：常用句式总结 disadvantages can explain everything. 一、十大功能段落 5）举例说明段 1） 话题引出段 For instance; Nowadays, there is a growing concern over the issue of …… Take…for an example; People in growing numbers are directing their attention to …… The following illustrations can serve as strong evidence of the phenomenon. With the development of ……, the problem of …has become increasingly serious. 6）原因列举段 When it comes to ……, people’s notions may vary from one to another. Why should this phenomenon take place? There are generally three factors Recently, a heated discussion has sprung up as to …… accounting for it. Traditional virtue/value has it that……, yet people are……currently. Having taken everything into consideration, we may attribute the sharp change to 2）图画图表描述段 three aspects. As is vividly shown in the picture,…… 7）意义阐释段 It is clearly depicted in the picture that…… The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to…. This picture depicts a thought‐provoking scene of …… The fact/phenomenon that…… indicates that … … According to the figures given in the chart,….. Having scrutinized the details of the picture, we can discuss the implications subtly The chart above provides a series of essential figures, illustrating the changes conveyed from it. taking place in a time span of …years. 8）归纳结论段 3) 观点对比段 In conclusion, In my opinion, Opposite voices are now rising in the debate. Some people firmly believe that……. As far as I am concerned, On the contrary, quite a few people argue that…… Taking into account all the analyses above, we may confidently come to the 第 14 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 conclusion that…… 10. Examples to prove the view are abundant. The most persuasive are the cases 9）预测趋势段 11. It goes without saying that if There is no denying that ……will continue increasing/decreasing in the 12. By contrast, a lot of people choose to better/worse direction. 13. The set of drawings above vividly depicts……As is shown in the first cartoon Undoubtedly, the tendency reflected from the chart will undergo a continuous 14. To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us that……yet the increase/decrease in the near future. symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously. 10）建议措施段 15. Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implication from these Therefore, it is imperative that we should take some drastic measures. thought‐provoking drawings. On the one hand, we can frequently use them to As far as I am concerned, two effective measures must be immediately taken to enlighten pull through the crisis. 16. What the picture conveys goes far beyond only a……Instead, it carries cultural meanings. The fact that 二、精选句式 17. In my opinion…Meanwhile, there are good reasons to advocate 1. The picture is thought‐ provoking. What it illustrates is a common 18. Only in this way can we phenomenon in today's society 19. The picture below illustrates the real meaning of……by stressing the fact that 2. It is vividly depicted in the cartoon that 20. In fact, throughout history people of many different cultures have 3. Undoubtedly the cartoon conveys the meaning that regarded…… 4. On the whole, these examples effectively clarify the saying that 21. In this way, we can help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture 5. The drawing vividly shows shows 6. The painter wants to tell us that, just like 22. I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following example： 7. This view is absolutely right in every sense. First and foremost, it applies to 23. I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and that individuals as…… our society will be a better place for us to live in…… 8. Furthermore, corporation and organizations of any kind should also embrace 24. As is shown in the pictures, with the rampancy of……In one pictures……On this view, for the contrary[适合两篇图画对比] 9. Last but not least, the country on the whole should move forward in terms of 25. The purpose of this picture is to show us that due (great enough) attention politics, economy, and culture so that we China as a nation can gain sustained has to be paid to…… respect from other peoples. 26. If we let this situation go (continue) as it is 第 15 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 27. Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic (effective) measures. For one first matter. thing, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to……. For 3 With the development of…, more and more people come to realize that… another ,we should enhance(imperative arouse) the awareness of people h 例句：With the development of high education, more and more people that …… .Only in this way can we ……. Also I believe that we humans can come to realize that knowledge plays a role of extreme importance in overcome this difficulty, and we will have a brighter future. modern society. 28. From these graphs, we can draw a conclusion that…… 4 In the past few years, there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in… 29. Why does this phenomenon appear? There are several possible reasons for h 例句：In the past few years, there has been a decline in the number of this. Above all……In addition species. 30. In order to ……, I have some suggestions. First,……Second……Third 5 It is a traditional practice to…in our society. 31. But there is a deeper social message in this cartoon. h 例句：It is a traditional practice for young people to be financially 32. It is urgent for the government to take measures to dependent on their parents for anything like marriage and housing. 33. As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”. 6 It has long been considered only right and proper/perfectly justified to… 34. Look before you leap. (三思而后行。) h 例句：It has long been considered only right and proper for the old to 35. With the rapid advances in the standard of living of the Chinese people in assume full responsibility for the growth of young. recent years, air conditioners have joined other household electrical 7 No one would deny that/everyone would agree that/there is no doubt that… appliances as items. ( 举例子方法 ) h 例句：Everyone would agree that, although our age entirely overshadows all previous ages in means of obtaining knowledge, reading still takes its 三、常用于开头的句式 leading role in all senses. 1 With the rapidly growing popularity of, the quality of our lives has been 8 To sb’s mind/ in sb’s eyes, sth. seems / means… considerably changed. h 例句：In the eyes of the public, official corruption means taking bribes. h 例句：With the rapidly growing popularity of computers in China, the But such corruption comes in many different forms. quality of our lives has been considerably changed. 9 Now it is widely believed that… 2 Recently, sth. /the problem of…has been brought to popular attention/has h 例句：Now it is widely believed that examinations are the best possible become the focus of public concern. measure for the selection of the qualified. h 例句：Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such 10 The birth/ invention of…has made an enormous/ essential difference to… But popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the is does not mean that… 第 16 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 h 例句：The birth of the computer has made an essential difference to the facing problems with nutrition or having to miss classes because of illness human progress. But it does not mean that this wonder dose no threat to our each term. society. 18 Nowadays, a heated debate/discussion about…is under way in China. Some 11 Sth. has changed the way our society develops, but its bright side should not people believe that…, whereas others argue that… keep us from following closely its dark side. h 例句：Nowadays, a heated debate about whether one should step h 例句：The genetic engineering has changed the way our society develops, forward bravely in the event of crime is under way in China. Some people but its bright side should not keep us from following closely its dark side. believe that one should step forward bravely no matter how dangerous it is, 12 What would our society be like if there were no…？ whereas others argue that one should put his or her own safety above h 例句：What would our society be like if there were no public morals? anything else. 13 Should we put sth. above sth. else? /Should we attach as much weight to sth. 19 When it comes to…, most people contend that…, but other people consider as to. sth. else? that… h 例句：Should we put intellectual development above moral education? h 例句：When it comes to fake commodities, most people contend that 14 Sth. is just the same as…/is compared to…/is like… people should battle against the falsehood of the fakes, but other people h 例句：Life in the middle of marriage if often compared to wire walking, for consider that buying fake commodities means nothing but “unlucky” which is in the early years spouses attract each other and in late years they need each hard to avoid. other. 20 There are many advantages and disadvantages in… 15 In our life, there often appears such an occasion when…/on which… h 例句：There are many advantages and disadvantages in owning a car. h 例句：In our daily life, there often appears such an occasion when we 四、 常用于结尾的句式 drink success to our work in one field but, at the same time, begin to do great damage to other fields. 1 It is hoped that we should place much emphasis on/pay more attention to… 16 One of the great men one said that…/There is an old saying that… h 例句：It is hoped that we should pay more attention to the problems of h 例句：A gifted American psychologist once said that it is an illusion to unemployment. believe in the Sunday‐school truth—more comfort, more happiness. 2 Only in this way/only when/only through…, will/can we… 17 According to the recent survey/statistics, there is…percent of… h 例句：It is only if all sides of society take their roles fully that we will h 例句：According to a recent survey made in a certain university, there are achieve the society we want. percent of male students and percent of female students either 3 As long as…, we will be able to…/the problems is bound to… 第 17 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 h 例句：As long as we persist in spreading scientific knowledge among the has benefited our life greatly. masses, all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life. 12 .No surprising/ It is apparent that the task of…demands/ requires/deserves 4 In the course of time/In a long run/In the long term, sth. is more immediate/serious/considerable attention/ consideration. likely/bound/sure to… h 例句：It is, therefore, apparent that the task of fighting against corruption h 例句：In a long run, the practice of birth control is believed to do a great requires considerable consideration now. benefit to the future of China. 13 We can come to the conclusion that… 5 In a word, there is every/little chance/probability/possibility that…in time to h 例句：We can come to the conclusion that living on campus is the best come. way of learning independence, and of understanding other people and h 例句：In a word, there is every chance that this wise move in economic society at large. construction will acquire a broader significance in time to come. 14 We then have reasons to be confident that in the near future… 6 Anything/anyone that/who…will have to… h 例句：We then have reasons to be confident that in the near future, no h 例句：Anyone who has a strong bias against China will have to threat her child is forced out of school because of poverty. with increased respect. 15 My suggestion is that…; otherwise… 7 It is high time that… h 例句：My suggestion is that effective measures should be taken to check h 例句：It is high time that the issue were to be solved so as to promote the population growth; otherwise, the potential consequences are unimaginable. economic development. 16 As for me, I have always been taking care to… So, I… 8 We should do our best in eliminating… h 例句：As for me, I have always been taking care to choose a goal and a h 例句：We should do our best in eliminating air pollution. right path before doing anything important. Then I will work hard and 9 The problem is not…; the problem is… perseveringly. So, I have made some achievements and I will do better. h 例句：The problem is not that we cannot do it; the problem is that we 17 So I believe a…tomorrow…will be achieved through efforts of every person. hate to do such nasty things. h 例句：So I believe a safe tomorrow of less car accidents will be achieved 10 In order to…, we must…为了……我们必须 through efforts of every person. h 例句：In order to make our world a better place in which to live, we must 18 Therefore, we should not only…but…as well. learn to live in harmony with all wildlife species. h 例句：Therefore, we should not only realize that competition and 11 All the above evidence/experience/ facts goes to show that… cooperation, like two sides of the coin, have to go hand in hand, but fix more h 例句：All the above evidence goes to show that the birth of computer attention on how to make full use of cooperation as well. 第 18 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 19 In short, …are the major problems to be solved to… problem of… h 例句：In short, shortage of water, decrease of fertile fields and h 例句：In contrast with the drawbacks caused by nuclear power, the solar environmental pollution are the major problems to be solved to increase power can serve as a better move toward the solution for the problem of grain production. energy crisis. 20 Who is to say that…? 5 It is true/obvious that sth can’t compete/be compared with sth else in…, but h 例句：Who is to say that our scientists may not provide a better theory? sth still enjoys/secures/possesses distinct/substantial advantage over sth else. h 例句：It is obvious that radio cannot compete with television in visuality, 五、 常用的过渡句式 but it still possesses substantial advantages over television. (One of these 1 Although lots of people follow the fashion/trend, I still set my heart on… is…Another…Still another…) h 例句：Although lots of people follow the fashion, I still set my heart on its 6 But if…, it is easy/not difficult/hard to see/find/discover that… negative effect on our society. h 例句：But if they adjust their frame of mind a little in the other direction, 2 For one thing… For another… As a third benefit/disadvantage… it is not hard for them to find that life is just as promising as before. h 例句：For one thing, some excellent students can take full advantage of 7 Superficially/On the surface/At first glance/In appearance, the issue in the holiday to awaken their personal interests such as painting, sightseeing question seems…. But in fact/in substance/on close examination, … and so on. For another, it can provide more chances for some poor students h 例句：At first glance, the western‐type democracy seems superior to any to help make two ends meet and to get prepared for the future by taking other types. But on close examination, it does not entitle every citizen of the part‐time jobs. As a third benefit, for those who are far from good at a same nation to the equal freedom to act. certain subject, there is a golden opportunity of catching up with other. 8 Those in favor of the issue in question argue /contend /hold /maintain /claim 3 It is no easy/simple task/job to furnish/identify/find every reason/cause for that…. But what they fail to consider/ analyze /see /find out is that… sth., but/while, on the whole, two/some factors shout louder/ weigh heavier h 例句：Those in favor of euthanasia(安乐死) contend that its practice can than others/stand out from others. benefit both the patient and his family. But what they fail to consider is that h 例句：It is no easy job to find every reason for the increase in the number euthanasia may be taken advantage of for some evil or hidden purposes. of teenagers who run away from their homes, but, on the whole, two factors 9 My our look on/choice of/participation in/devotion to…stems from/derives shout louder than others. First of all, …. Second, … from/results from some/several chief factors. 4 In contrast with the drawbacks/demerits/flaws of sth., sth. else can serve as a h 例句：My choice of the career stems from several chief factors. First… better step/move/advance in the right direction/toward the solution for the Second… 第 19 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 10 10．A variety of/Quite a few factors have led me to do… h 例句：As can be seen from the picture, the car breaks stops on the way h 例句：Quite a few factors have led me to form the habit of reading. and cannot move any further. 8 It is most likely that by drawing the pictures, the artist intends… 六、常用于描述漫画的句式。 h 例句：It is most likely that by drawing the pictures, the artist intends not 1 The cartoon/picture briefs/depicts/shows… only to tell us the story of fish but also to set us thinking more about nature. h 例句：The cartoon briefs the history of commercial fishing in the 20th century. 七、常用图表作文的句式： 2 In the picture, … 1 According to the figures shown in the table/graph we can see/conclude that… h 例句：In the picture, an American girl looks so pleased in the richly h 例句：According to the figures shown in the table, we can see that great decorated Chinese national costumes. changes have been taking place in people’s diet over the period from 1988 to 3 Looking at the picture, … 1998. h 例句：Looking at the picture, many people cannot help laughing. … 2 We can see/We have noted/It can be seen from the table/chart/graph that… 4 This is what the picture indicates. h 例句：We have noted from the graph that there is a wide gap between the h 例句：It is not unusual for Chinese children to get money from their top ten universities both of China and of the world. parents, grandparents or relatives during the Spring Festival. … This is what 3 The graph/table/chart shows/indicates/reveals/points out that… the picture indicates. h 例句：The chart reveals that the number of road accidents is spiraling 5 The two pictures here illustrate… upward every year as more and more highways are constructed all over h 例句：The two pictures here illustrate how a flower in a greenhouse is China. destroyed when exposed to a storm. 4 As is shown/can be seen in the chart/graph/diagram released by the 6 In the first picture, …. While in the second one, … government… h 例句：In the first picture, a lonely small boat, in spite of the good catch, h 例句：As we can see in the diagram released by the government, the rapid does not disturb the fishes that are swimming leisurely. While in the second growth of population has resulted in the extinction of many wildlife species. one, the sea is over‐crowded with fishing boats, and a lonely fish, desperately 5 After considering the information in the graph/table/chart, we might conclude trying to escape, finds no place to hide. that… 7 As depicted in the picture/As we can see in the picture/As can been seen from h 例句：After considering the information in the graph, we might conclude the picture/As is shown by the drawing, … that the energy structure in rural areas has been greatly improved over the 第 20 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 past 15 years. (一) 审题构思过程(5—10分钟完成) 6 The chart/graph/table shows a minimal/slight / slow / steady / marked / dramatic/ sharp / sudden increase/rise/decline/reduction/fall/drop 图画作文 in…compared with those of last year/10 years ago/last century… 1.列出重要图画细节词 h 例句：The graph shows a marked decline in the number of wildlife species 2.以小见大联想把握象征意义 compared with that of last century. 3.把握背景原因和两条建议 7 This year, the products of…dropped to half/was cut in half/doubled/tripled. h 例句：This year, the products of cotton doubled. 图表作文 8 The number of … grew/rose/dropped from…to… 1.选出典型的数据—纵横对位 h 例句：The number of car accidents grew from 3691 in 1985 to 8245 in 2.把握变化—联系背景原因 1995. 3.建议或未来发展趋势 9 No increase is shown in …; then came a sharp increase of … h 例句：No increase is shown in 1988; then came a sharp increase of 8 (二)下笔创作过程(20—25分钟) million. 10 Sth. is twice/three/half as large/high/much as sth. else. 1. 丰富提纲内容 h 例句：The production of cotton is twice as much as that of wheat. 简单写出每段的三个方面，用简洁的词或符号代替即可，提纲具体化可以11 The table/chart/graph represents the development and changes in … 让自己沿着一个严谨的框架前行，避免天马行空、意识流主宰思维的危险 h 例句：The table represents the development and changes in agriculture 2. 每段按一定句数创作 structure in the past 30 years. 3段式作文开篇段落引出话题，评价现状或描述图画图表，尽量用3‐4句12 By comparison with… it dropped/decreased from…to…/ by… 完成任务，其中设置一个长句，使得第一段达到50—60个单词。 h 例句：By comparison with 1990, it dropped by 15 percent. 中间拓展段是论述主题并展现实力的黄金段落，要阐明图画图表寓意并且13 There appeared an even more stable/consistent/steady tendency to rise/drop. 深刻分析原因背景，点出几个方面，结构有层次感，语言有闪光点和深度，写 出7‐8句比较合理，总字数控制到80‐100字。 写作补充材料4：写作模板 结论段不止下结论，还要提出2‐3点解决问题的建议。并且设置一个漂亮 的结束句，使用排比、强调、倒装、虚拟句型体现句式变化，写出5‐6句不算一、写作创作流程 太多，总字数在70‐80字左右。 第 21 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 （一）议论文 3. 创作有气势的开篇句 As is known to all, it is important to be/do…. I think there are at least 4. 注意2、3两段的段首句和层次感 two reasons for … For one thing, … For another, …… Let’s 英语议论文写作讲究拓展阐述部分有段首句和支持段首句的若干论据。分take … for example …. From what I have mentioned above we can see that 层次表达又要避免数字排列的机械感，讲究启承转合的多样化表达，因此2、without … we cannot … It is clear that,… plays an important part in … 3两段就有可以依据的优秀表达模型。 Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter. Some 5. 尽量长短句搭配，每段构造1—2个长句 people think that … According to them, all of us should … Others argue 6. 创作有特色的篇末结束句 that … In their opinion, nobody can … without … Compared with …, … has a 倒装：Only in this way can laid‐off workers completely shrug off poverty and regain lot of advantages over … There is no doubt that … As a consequence, … their dignity in life. In short, I firmly support the view that … It is because … So my 强调：In conclusion, it is persistent work that is conducive to your grasping a large conclusion is that … (109 words) vocabulary. 虚拟：Given all the above arguments, it is high time that the authorities enforced （二）图表作文 some reforms to convert traditional education strategies into squality‐oriented As is shown in the table (or in the picture), … dropped from … in 1994 education. to … in 1996. According to the figures given in the table, … has great increased 7. 注意笔迹工整 (or decreased) in the past … years (or decades), reaching … in 1996. From the table we can also see that there has been a sharp decline (or rise) in … It is (三)修改润色过程(5—10分钟) clear that … 1.主谓一致 There are at least two good reasons for … On the one hand, … 2.名词单复数 Let’s have an example to illustrate the great increase in … On the other 3.时态一致 hand, … is due to the fact that … In addition, … is responsible for … Maybe 4.搭配 there are some other reasons to show … But it is generally believed that the 5.拼写 above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable. 6.用词 As far as I am concerned, … So my conclusion is that … I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded. (131 words) 二、文章模板 三、段落框架 第 22 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 1• 图表漫画类文章问题段 What is the purpose of the drawer of the pictures? On one hand, the drawer intends, by producing these two pictures of sharp contrast, to arouse public 描述漫画图表句；引出暗含主题句 ；简短解释句 ；过渡句 awareness/concern of the _____. On the other hand, the drawer wants to attract From the cartoon we can see that _____. What it illustrates is a common the attention of governments and departments concerned and urge them to take phenomenon in today's society, and it conveys the symbolic meaning of_____. effective counter‐measures. According to a recent survey made by professor Wang, head of social department 5 ．暗含主题段 in Peking University, 90% of the people across the country are suffering from the problem. It is clear that ___plays a important role in our life and work. 引出暗含主题句 ；列举暗含主题句 ；过渡句 2 ．原因段 What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today's society, and it conveys the symbolic meaning of_____. With the increasing pace of modern life, perhaps no 引出原因句 ；列举原因句 ；过渡句 change has characterized the past decade more dramatically than that of people's What caused the effect? There are at least two possible reasons. To begin view on their own life. It is generally agreed upon that _____. On the one hand, no with,_____. In the second place,_____. There may be some other reasons doubt, _____. On the other hand, _____. What is more, _____. There are many responsible for ___, but I think what has been mentioned above is generally cases showing that _____. acceptable. 写作补充材料5：精选范文 3 ．对策段 引出对策句 ；列举对策句 ；过渡句 一、图画作文 We should take immediate measures, for if the present situation continues as before, serious outcome will come up. First of all, the government should propagandize to arouse public awareness of_____. In the second place, the government should take effective measures to _____. Finally,_____ should be banned by law. This is my point of view and I am sure my idea is both reasonable and workable. 4 ．漫画人目的段 引出目的句 ；列举目的句 第 23 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 This picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard, and Pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world. As is shown being shocked at the message. This is because the billboard is advertising a "Sale in the cartoon, two cars are giving off waste gas and three people trying to avoid of Dead Bodies." The cartoon is a criticism of the careless use of simplified breathing in the poisonous gas by masking their face with their hands. The characters. poisonous gas sent off by factories, domestic appliances and automobiles has Obviously, the advertiser wants to inform people of the sale of something else‐not made the air unhealthy for people to breathe. dead bodies! But we don't know what it is, because the three characters which There is no denying that automobiles are indications of civilization, progress make up the message are used incorrectly. Nowadays too many people not only do and development; nevertheless, automobiles cause the serious problem of air not take enough care to write properly, they even invent their own simplified ways pollution. Scientists have warned that unless effective measures are taken, the of writing. problem of pollution will eventually get out of hand. Actually, people are showing Simplifying the old, complicated characters has been a great benefit, enabling a real concern over the problem. For example, there is an increasingly loud voice people to learn to read and write quickly. But we should stick to the standard from the public for firm action against pollution from automobiles. simplified characters, make sure that we use them properly, and definitely not Indeed, the earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for make up our own simplified characters. Otherwise, what was intended to make ourselves and for our descendants. In my opinion, we should work out concrete communication easier could result in making it more difficult. solutions to the problem of pollution from poisonous gas given off by automobiles. For example, the automobiles should be equipped with a device which can 2、隐形杀手（关于污染）$[必背] dispose of waste gas so as to prevent it from polluting air. Only in this way can we Your essay should meet the requirements below: really solve the problem of air pollution caused by automobiles. 1. Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed 二、图表作文[背] 2. Draw a conclusion and give your comment on the cartoon 第 24 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 Statistics in People's Daily Expenses in Xi'an of 200 words about “The Role of Migrant Workers”. You can agree and/or disagree, [图画/图表描述段]What is shown in the table above indicates that dramatic completely or partially to above statement. But no matter which position you take, changes have taken place in the daily expenses in Xi' an from 1995 to 1999. you should supporting reasons. The expenses on food have declined by 30% while those on clothing and recreation have increased respectively by 9% and 7%. The statistics of rise and fall seem to As is known to all, migrant workers have made a great contribution to the exist in isolation but closely related to one another. prosperity of cities. They are an indispensable part of our work force. Most of [原因列举段]There are two factors accounting for these changes. Development them work on construction sites. There is no doubt that without migrant workers in economy is an essential one in the five years. The increased income resulting many of construction projects would have to be held up for lack of manpower. In from economic growth plays an important part in the less expense on food. addition, a large number of migrant workers are a beneficial factor, which Hence, a small percentage of total income is enough to cover food expense. enhances the consumption of food and daily items. This in turn helps to develop Another one is the changes in life style. When food presents no worry to the food industry and service trades in cites. All these are positive aspects of migrant average, people begin to focus more of interest on handsome appearance and workers in cities. happy leisure time. As a result of such a shift, spending on clothing and recreation However, as a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides”. The same is increased year after year. the case with migrant workers. Firstly, most of them are not well educated and [趋势预测段]From the analyses made above, we may come to the conclusion professionally trained. Some of them have had very little schooling. As you know. that people's living standards in Xi' an have been constantly improved between Illiterate people, who are usually ignorant of the law, tend to make trouble, thus 1995 and 1999. With the further growth in economy and more changes in life endangering social order. Secondly, most of the migrant workers swarm into big style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the table will continue cities just to make money. Being illiterate or unskilled, some of them would stop at in the better direction. nothing to get what they are ambitious for. Therefore, they are a potential threat to the peace and stability of society. 三、规定情景式作文 In my opinion, in the appraisal of migrant workers, it is one‐sided to affirm everything or to negate everything. We should appreciate the great contribution made by them, and at the same time pay enough attention to the problems 规定情景式作文1：[重点推荐]必背 caused by them. (244) Directions: Migrant workers (外地民工) have made a great contribution to the 规定情景式作文2：[关于压力] prosperity of cities. In this part, you are to write within 40 minutes a composition 第 25 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 Directions: Stress is a natural part of modern life. In this part, you are required to to life. Others argue that stress contributes to one’s mental decline and hence write within 40 minutes a composition of no less than 200 words about “Stress in endangers his health. According to them, relaxation, the opposite of stress, is Modern Life” (现代生活中的压力). You are to state briefly the relationship essential for a healthy mind and body. between stress and modern life and the different attitudes towards stress. At the Personally, I’m in favor of the former view. I think it is impossible to end of your composition you should draw your own conclusion. avoid stress when one is entirely devoted to the career he pursues. In my opinion, 众所周知，压力是日常生活中很自然的事，并且也无法躲避压力。随着it is only when the stress gets out of control that it can lead to poor performance 现代生活的节奏不断加快，我们从早到晚总是感到忙忙碌碌。而且很难减慢。and ill health. (207 words) 我们似乎觉得我们周围人人都在拼命干。因此，不管一个人干什么，他总会感注：be on the go 忙碌 到压力。可见，在竞争社会中压力和生活是影印不离的。 然而，不同的人对压力的看法不同。有些人认为，压力并不是通常所认规定情景式作文3： 为的坏事。他们的观点是， 某种压力对提供动力和使生活哟目的所不可缺少“据权威机构调查显示，2001年，我国空调总产量为2500万台，而市场容量的。其他人则争辩说，压力加剧了精力的消耗，因此危害人的健康。在他们看仅为1500万台。空调已经成为继VCD、彩电后又一个家电企业力拼的市场。来，压力的反面，即轻松，是身心健康所必不可少的。 于是空调厂家坐不住了，打折、送礼品，甚至出现了空调论斤卖的怪事。近日， 就个人而言，我赞成前一种观点。当一个人全心投入到他所从事的事业空调企业又想出了新花样：举办空调流行趋势发布会。面临巨大的竞争压力，时，压力是不可能避免的。依我看，只有当压力失去控制时，它才会导致行为多数空调生产厂家都意识到了自己生存的危机，他们不得不推出新产品以占据失调和身体不适。 消费市场。同时，许多空调大企业都声称他们不会去挑起空调价格战。但Stress in Modern Life 是，……” As everyone knows, stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no will there be an air‐conditioner "price battle" this year? way to avoid it. As the pace of modern life continues to increase, we are always There is a discussion in a newspaper on the issue. feeling on the go from morning till night. And it is hard to slow down. It seems to Write an essay to the newspaper us that everyone around us is aggressive. Therefore, whatever one does, he feels 1) giving a brief introduction to the issue, under stress all the time. It is clear that stress has much to do with the life in a 2) stating your view about the "price battle", and competitive society. 3) justifying your prediction. Different people, however, think of stress quite differently. Some believe You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。 that stress is not the bad thing it is often supposed to be. They are of the opinion With the rapid advances in the standard of living of the Chinese people in that a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and to give purpose recent years, air‐conditioners have joined other household electrical appliances 第 26 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 as items in great demand. However, output has far exceeded supply, as 3) Should it be necessary to enlarge the private car market? Why or why not? manufacturers have scrambled for sales in this profitable market. As a result, Nowadays, any Chinese can enjoy the luxury of owning a private car – if he fierce competition has driven them to resort to all sorts of measures to pull ahead or she can afford it. Having a car of your own means no more traveling to work on of their rivals and avoid going bankrupt. crowded buses or subway trains, and you can drop off the children at school on These measures include aggressive advertising campaigns, offering a free gift the way. Moreover, it also means that you can enjoy the weekends and holidays with every purchase of an air‐conditioner, and ‐‐ most important of all ‐ lowering better, because with a car you can go to places where the regular buses and trains prices. Price wars are a common phenomenon whenever supply outstrips demand do not go, and so you can find a quiet scenic spot with no crowds. in a free‐market economy, and China's newly liberalized economy is no exception. However, there are drawbacks to owning a car. For one thing, with the Nevertheless, I do not think we will see a repeat of the recent price war in the increase in car ownership in recent years, the roads are becoming more and more air‐conditioner market this year. crowded, often making the journey to work more of a nightmare than a dream. I have three reasons for my prediction. The first is that the earlier round of For another, it is not cheap to run a car, as the prices of gasoline and repairs are price‐cutting eliminated the less‐efficient manufacturers from the industry; so constantly rising, not to mention the prices you have to pay for a license and there are fewer companies supplying the market. The second is that the insurance coverage. government has taken measures to regulate the air‐conditioner market, Having considered both sides of the argument, I have come to the eliminating the chaos that price wars entail. And the third is that with China's conclusion that the advantages of owning a car outweigh the disadvantages. admission to the WTO, manufacturers will have to offer more attractive ‐ not Therefore, it seems to me that China should increase its output of automobiles cheaper ‐ products. and enlarge the private car market. The result would be that cars would become cheaper, while at the same time the extra demand would encourage the auto 规定情景式作文4：关于私家车 industry to produce more efficient and family‐oriented vehicles. A. Title: Private car 四、提纲式作文 B. Word limit: about 200 words (not including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the outline below and should start with 提纲式作文1：关于道路交通 the given opening sentence: “Nowadays any Chinese can enjoy the luxury of Road Accidents owning a private car‐ if he can afford it.” Outline: 1. Losses caused by road accidents 1) Advantages of owning a private car. 2. Suggested ways to reduce road accidents 2) Disadvantages of owning a private car. 第 27 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 3. My comments 道路状况。例如：应该投资更多的钱来建造新的公路，许多又老又窄城市街道 应加宽或重建。其次，地方当局应该用各种可能的方法来教育人民遵守交通规Road Accidents 则。最后，行人穿过繁华街道时应小心谨慎。 In the past five years the number of road accidents has been on the rise in 我认为，以上所提到的几个方面是避免交通事故所必需的。随着车辆不big cities. Whenever they happen, the people involved are either injured or killed. 断的增加，城市道路正变得越来越拥挤。但是假如每个人各尽其责并遵守交通They cause great losses both to the country and to victims’ families. Therefore, it 规则，道路将会变得更安全。我相信，交通状况将会改善，尽管我们还有许多is urgent that we do something to reduce traffic accidents and make our roads 的困难要克服。 safe. There are several ways I think to cut down to accident rate. In the first 提纲式作文2： place, the government should take effective measures to improve road conditions. Importance of Confidence For example, more funds ought to be invested in building new highways and many Directions: In this part, you are to written an essay of about 200 words within 40 of the old narrow streets in cities widened or reconstructed. Secondly, local minutes. Your essay should be based on the information given in the outline below authorities should educate people in every possible way to comply with traffic Outline: regulations. Finally, pedestrians should be very careful whenever crossing busy 1. Importance of confidence streets. 2. Reasons for lack of confidence In my opinion, the above mentioned ways are essential to avoid traffic 3. Necessity to build up confidence accidents. With the number of cars continuing to rise, the roads in cities are The Importance of Confidence getting more and more crowded. But if everyone does his part and observes Whatever one does, one should do it with confidence. If one has no traffic rules, the road will be safer to all of us. I trust traffic conditions will be confidence, there is little possibility that one can achieve anything when faced improving though we still have a long way to go. (200 words) with hardships. This truth seems to be self‐evident. In reality, however, we do see a lot of people who always complain that they lack the ability to do something or 最近5年来道路事故的数目不断上升，尤其在城市中。每当发生交通事that their difficulties are too great to overcome. For some, this might be true. But 故，有关的人员不是受伤就是死亡。它们对国家和受害者的家庭造成了巨大的for many others, this only shows that they have lost heart. 损失。因此，迫在眉睫的是，我们应该采取措施来减少交通事故并确保道路安Why do some people often feel frustrated even though they are capable of 全。 doing something? I think there are two main reasons. In the first place, these 我想有几个方法可以降低事故率。首先，政府应该采取有力措施来改善people don’t have a correct estimate of themselves. For example, …… 第 28 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 Secondly, there is another possibility that they exaggerate the difficulties. They When an opportunity presents itself, it brings a promise but never realizes it can’t see ….. They tend to …….. on its own. If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your In my opinion, one should build up faith in oneself as long as he has a right ambitions you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared. Otherwise, you attitude towards his own abilities. We should neither underestimate nor will take no advantage of opportunities when they come to visit you. It is clear overestimate our abilities. As a proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a that in order to be highly qualified for out future jobs, we should make every way.” With confidence we can certainly cope with any task we are faced with. possible preparation. The difference between a man who succeeds and one who does not lies 一个人不管做什么事，他应该充满信心地去做。 如果他没有信心，那他only in the way each treats opportunities. The successful person always makes 取得成功的可能性就很小，尤其是当他面临困难时。这个道理似乎明白无误。adequate preparations to meet opportunities as they duly arrive. The unsuccessful 然而，在现实中我们确实看到许多人，他们总是抱怨说，他们缺乏办事的能力，person, on the other hand, works little and just waits to see them pass by. 或者说，他们的困难大得克服不了。 对于有些人来说，这可能是对的。但是Obviously, the two different attitudes towards opportunities may lead to quite 对许多其他人来说，这只能表明他们已经失去信心。 different consequences. 为什么有些人即使能够办得到的事也常常感到灰心呢？我认为有两点原In my opinion, there are plenty of opportunities for everyone in our society, 因。首先，这些人对自己没有一个正确的估计。 例如：….. 其次，还有一in our society, but only those who are prepared adequately and qualified highly 种可能，就是他们夸大了困难。他们看不到….. 他们往往……… can make use of them to achieve their purpose. (208 words ) 依我看，一个人只要对自己的能力有正确的态度，就有可能对自己建立信心。机不可失，时不再来。 机遇常常悄然而去。因此，奉劝诸君珍惜机遇，我们既不应过高估计我们的能力，也不该低估我们的能力。常言道：“有志者，、谨慎处之。 事竟成”。只要有信心，我们一定能完成任何面临的任务。 每当机遇降临，伴之而来的是成功的希望， 但是机遇不能自行实现成功。 假如你要取得成就或要实现你的雄心壮志，你必须努力工作、艰苦奋斗、准备提纲式作文3：关于机遇 好条件。否则，机遇来临时你却无法利用。显然，为了能够完全适应我们未来1. Contingency (偶然性) of opportunity 的工作，我们必须做好一切可能的准备。 2. Relationship Between opportunity and success 成功者与失败者之间的区别就在于处理机遇的态度。成功者做好充分准3. My view on opportunity 备迎接机遇的适时来临，而失败者工作懒散，眼看着机遇悄然而过。可见，两Opportunities don’t come often. They come every once in a while. Very 种不同的对待机遇的态度导致了截然不同的后果。 often, they come quietly and go by without being noticed. Therefore, it is 我的观点时，在我们的社会里人人都有许多机遇，但是只有那些做好充分准备advisable that you should value and treat them with care. 并且高度称职的人才能利用机遇达到自己目的。 第 29 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 五、提纲图表式作文 [关于假冒商品] Directions: Your essay must meet the requirements below. 1. Show your understanding of the meaning of the picture below 2. State the harmful effects of fake and inferior products 3. Suggest ways to fight against fake and inferior products As the picture given depicts, the socialist market‐oriented economy in our country is developing rapidly, just like a truck running at a high speed. But the severely punished by the law. On the other hand, due to the growing complexity general public is surprised to find that there are more and more fake and inferior of the market, consumers are often faced with deceptive practices. Although products seriously hampering the expansion of our marker economy. Consumers there are laws designed to protect consumers, there is not a sufficient number of have to be very careful in purchasing goods and services they need; otherwise law enforcers to cover all the abuses of the marketplace. Hence, consumers should they will fall into the traps set by the illegal manufacturers who make fake and learn to discern between true and false. Only in this way can they defend their inferior products. own legal rights and interests. There is no doubt that fake and inferior products are extremely harmful. In 正如所给的图画所描绘的，我国社会主义市场经济正在迅速发展，就像一the first place, they endanger people’s health, giving rise to a lot of injury 辆高速行驶的卡车。但是公众惊讶地发现，越来越多的假冒伪劣产品严重地阻accidents. For instance, inferior‐quality medicines not only aggravate a patient’s 碍了我国市场经济的发展。消费者必须经常谨慎地去购买他们所需的货物或服condition, but also tend to threaten his life and, what’s worse, to result in his 务，否则他们会落入制假人所设的陷阱。 death. Secondly, fake and inferior products are usually sold on the cheap. In many 毫无疑问，假冒伪劣产品极其有害.首先,它们危害人民的健康,引发了许多cases they interfere with the normal economic order in our country, affecting the 伤害事故.例如,伪劣药品不仅使病人恶化,而且往往会威胁病人的生命,更糟的market of many high‐quality goods. This in a great degree, hinders the 是，导致病人的死亡。其次，假冒伪劣产品通常廉价出售。在许多情况下，它development of our socialist market economy and harms the interests of our state. 们有干扰了我国正常的经济秩序，影响了许多高质量产品的销路。这在很大程Therefore, we can say that fake and inferior products are a dangerous “tumor” in 度上阻碍了我国社会主义市场经济的健康发展，并损害了我们国家的利益。因our healthy economy, which must be cut away as soon possible. 此，我们可以说，假冒伪劣产品是我们健康经济中的一颗“毒瘤”，对此必须In my opinion, several strong measures should be adopted to fight against 尽快清除。 fake and inferior products. On the one hand, those who make them must be 依我看，必须采取若干措施来与假冒伪劣产品斗争。一方面，制假者必须第 30 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 依法严惩。另一方面，由于市场的日益复杂化消费者常会遇到欺诈行为。虽然There are many factors that can contribute to a person’s success. Whether he is 有法律保护消费者，但是没有足够数量的执法者来处理市场的全部流弊。所以，at school or at work, he is more likely to succeed if he is hard‐working, intelligent, 消费者应该学会辨别真假。只有这样，消费者才能维护他们的合法权益 responsible, and so on. But of all the possible characteristics affect one’s success, I believe self‐confidence is the most important for the following reasons. The first reason is that when a person has self‐confidence he believes in himself. 六、其他类型文章[拓展看看 He believes that he can and will succeed, and this gives him the courage to try new The Effects of Technology on Learning things. In order to be successful we must be willing to take some risks, so having The technological advances of the last few years have been amazing. Never self‐confidence is very important. Another reason is that a confident person rarely before have students had such a wide variety of resources to help them in their gives up. When he fails he tries again and again until he wins. A final reason is that studies. Those who can take advantage of these resources have the opportunity to confident people are not afraid to show off their achievements. This is not to say learn about more subjects and to acquire more in‐depth knowledge. In my opinion, that they should brag, but that they should gracefully and confidently accept the students can indeed learn more and learn more quickly with the help of modern compliments of others. When their achievements are noticed more by others at technology. school or work, they are more likely to succeed. The piece of technology most important as a learning tool must be the computer. In short, I believe self‐confidence to be the most important factor in success. It Paired with the Internet, it allows students to research topics more quickly and enables people to take risks, try again when they fail, and enjoy their thoroughly and to write up their findings more rapidly as well. Furthermore, accomplishments when they win. With these abilities, a confident person can advances in many fields are being made so fast these days that it is impossible four succeed easily at school or work. textbooks to keep up. Technology allows students to keep abreast of the latest The Advantages of Trying New Things developments. Also, it cannot be denied that many students enjoy using such Everyone likes to succeed at what he does, and it is more likely that we will resources in their studies. Because of this, they are more likely to pursue subjects succeed at things we already know how to do well. However, to limit ourselves to in greater depth. doing only those things which we are good at will cause us to miss many For all these reasons, I believe that technology is of great benefit to today’s opportunities to develop other interests and skills. For this reason, I believe that it students. Of course, it is still possible to learn without the aid of such devices, but I is to our advantage to try new things and take risks. believe that those students who are fortunate enough to have access to When we try something new we may fail. But we can still learn something from technological resources should take every advantage of them. our failure, even if it is only how to cope with failing. We may also succeed at a Self‐confidence new activity and this will bring us a feeling of accomplishment and greater 第 31 页 共 32 页
MBA高分作文必读 self‐confidence. We may also discover a new interest that will bring pleasure to our lives or lead to a new line of work. Furthermore, it is not always possible to play it safe and do only those things that we know. We cannot control every situation and no doubt we will someday meet with challenges. If we already have the experience of testing ourselves in an unfamiliar situation, we will be better able to handle any situation that arises. To sum up, trying new things and taking risks allow us to develop both our skills and our personal interests. If we try our best we are certain to gain something positive from the experience whether we win or lose. [[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[ 第 32 页 共 32 页
